Best Cousins - Cover

Latest version of the cover for a manga I've been working on called Best Cousins.
I started this comic quite a while ago, I just never uploaded anything from it to dA, or worked on it much.
I felt like re-doing the cover, because the last version looks really tacky now.

Those two characters are Lorr and Toothpaste. xD Yeah it's sort of based on my life, like previous memorable events and such that are story worthy... But there's more to it. >:3

Since I started TAFE I haven't really had time to work on it. :C I'm afraid that if I work on it after long periods of time my style will keep changing. xD

So anyway, would anyone be interested in reading this? I've only completely finished 4 pages. Completely finished as in, inked, scanned, toned, and text added.
If so, I may upload the pages I've done so far. :0

My mum and stepdad said they really liked what I've done and that I should publish it. ;w;... That'd be cool.
Would anyone buy this if I did print it? o:

Drawn in Paint Tool SAI.
Edited in Photoshop CS4.

Art & Characters (c) =chocogingerfingers